defying atrophy

In this, so late a season

It seems the bud may finally bloom
In this, so late a season;
The earth revolved, the sun gave room;

It seems the bud may finally bloom.

We welcome fruit from barren womb.
A love beyond all reason.
It seems the bud may finally bloom
In this, so late a season.

Ben Kohns

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3 responses to “In this, so late a season”

  1. revivedwriter Avatar
    revivedwriter

    I like the way you set apart that fourth line.

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    1. Ben Kohns Avatar
      Ben Kohns

      It was an accident, and I fixed it. Should I put it back?

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        revivedwriter

        I actually legitimately liked it. I know it’s not part of the form, but you can break the rules a bit. 🙂

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